Style

Some tips was helpful in creating the paper with style and to have the readers to read it constantly flowing. Few rules I knew that shouldn't be written that way. Unless with exceptions of explaining like using direct quote or foreign language character's quote. Other than that, I knew some English writing rules but can't remember them all. I am not a writer but I try my best every time making my story or essay to the point and audiences understanding my literature. Helpful tips were writing in nouns and verbs not with adjective, this problems here I always tend to forget noun and verb in writing a sentence. Other is that I sometime tend to overwrite and my explanations so I fully provides every information that is needed to say. Just like Martin Luther King Jr. he wrote letter from jail which is pretty long at least he's trying to say everything, so do I. Other than that, I always try to write excellent papers knowing that I will make mistakes when someone tells me to make changes. I can't promise a best paper ever but at least I can promise you that you will understand what my point of the paper would be about.

Effective argument Martin Luther King Jr.

Martin Luther King Jr. (MLK) he was arrested in the non-violent campaign in Birmingham, Alabama. MLK wrote his letter to the fellow clergymen which himself really wanted people around the nation to hear his story about what has happens in his jail cell. Police arrested MLK for being "outside agitator" which is ought to be a crime for protest against a movement. An example of fallacy, begging the question in page 155, "Anyone who lives inside the United States can never be considered an outsider anywhere within its bounds." It is a free speech for people across the nation to promotes their thought and right like an example of MLK carefully chosen his words to describe in an meaningful thoughts.  Three appeals of logos, ethos, pathos were all used to make in the entire letter. His tone was strong bold symbols of what's going on with segregations and black's right into equally where "all men are created equals" quote from third president Thomas Jefferson. MLK has also used other quotes from famous people or from anyone who involves where there are clashes between blacks and whites. MLK was effective in writing his letter to address to whole Americans and outside the nations such as Africans people feeling like the "Waits…." must be ended meaning "they never" will resolves this problem. Other fallacy is on page 163, hasty generalization, white people do supports black culture when they are going through the hard time. "Christianity takes two thousand years to make accomplishment and  black are going in a 340 years which is thought to be an hurries." Of course, people can't live to that long to see it changes. In MLK presences, he wrote the letter to make it ends at 340 marks to bring freedoms to the blacks so they won't have to go a two thousand years to get it worked out. An ineffective part takes place when the unprepared will act quick in direct action. At least there is something to approach to the actions to make it equally and rights.


MLK impact many people as we are living today without him, his logical fallacies has many statements. I hope I can learn from him and write better persuasive paper, he is such an intelligent black leader and will always be.

Logical Fallacies

Either-or: A product at the store always comes up for the best seller. A couple is looking for a brand new television for $1,000 dollar. Option A: they would have buy 900 dollars 48 inches without 3-D vision. Or Option B: $1,100 with better sound and vision of 3-D which is awesome. The worker would encourage you to get Option B so they could make some more money as bribing. Therfore its up to the couple for their needs, they would have to persausive hard to make decision to go over the budget or save money with low quality television.

Bandwagon appeals: Doctor saying you are required for annual checkup. Yourself, you went to doctor last year and saying your perfect in health. Your friends recently got checkup and flu shot and suggesting you to get flu shot and see physican or your own family doctor to check for any signs or symptoms or any testing for disease. You thinking about this if you should see physican and talk about flu shot. Your friends gave you feedbacks that they never did got sick. Now your on neutral position wheather to get annual checkup but feeling waste of time doing this as well.

Rationalization: Making mistakes during the day. Waking up in the morning late for work because of the weather that turns the power off. Your now making excuses for return to your work late. At work you tend to be distracted but feeling guilty about lying to boss for silly excuse. Only if the power works just fine, the better you will be off during the day.

Topic

I'm going to write about texting/talking while driving at the same time should be illegal. Reason this should be promote the law so the road can become more safer to drive. None phone calls or text can be more important to make contacts.

When your opinion matters

This happens once in awhile. I always think everything at the same time and trying to answer the problem. I had said things not exactly what I wanted and think that was right. Then I realized I was wrong and had to changed it. There are time when this happens and when it doesn't work out smoothly. Can't expect everything to runs just fine and hoping it will turn out just what you wanted. There has to be two sides when one's right and one's wrong.

I'm going to college, I am in Athletic Training program. When I was freshman in college, I wanted to work with athletes and giving care that I already learned in class. So, I can applies on athletes in whatever they needs to be recovery. I had taken classes lectures about it and took test. Passed it, then I can do it. Instead, my athletic trainer supervisor says, "No, needs to be more training and practicing before you could work with athletes. You should be observing the older athletic trainer students, in order you will gain experiences before you work with athlete, understood?" I told them, "Well yeah, I can understand that, but with the athletic trainers doing special test or functional test. I wanted to be part of it instead of observing them doing it. That way I could feel if they have positive diganosis, because when your just watching, you won't be able to feel them and not learn much as you do on hands on job. With hands on the job, you are involved much more and learning much more. The more confidences you will builds up on yourself in giving properly treatments later on. With some participates, you can be feeling good about it and confidences builds up on time with learning expericences." Boss of athletic trainer said he agreed with me but afraids that we might be more harmful in giving treatment without knowing how much forces it takes unless your training and taking more test, you will feel better. Even though, I disagree with him, but has to accepts what they said. I can't overule him, at least I'm trying to make things better and better learning enivornments and learning over time builds up faster and your will be ready for the real world coming to you soon.

Muddiest Point

Hmm, pretty much will have no problem thinking for an assignment for this topic. Reason because lots of discriminations, bias, opinions, and feelings happens all over the world. The only part can be difficulty is the research to find and to get paper done. However, I think no problem at all in finding this assignments topic soon. I have no questions about this or anything unclear to be more explained to me. If I always needs help, I would contact teacher. That's teacher's role to help students understanding and to learn from class that they teaches.

Personal Narrative - Notaro

Does the writer provide an introduction that grabs the reader’s attention?

Part of it, at first what basket? then it talks about family members taking turn taking care for grandpa.

Does the writer focus on significant events in his or her life rather than trying to narrate his or her entire life’s story?

It explains who grandpa is and what he do everyday. He is illness, can't do much but ignoring nurse's order and been off to do what he wants to do. Its fun how the story goes with food for the animals where nana gets crazy about that.

Do the descriptions of the characters or important objects in the memoirs include sensory details that help readers to visualize, hear, smell or feel them?

Yes, I could imagine because it normally does happen everytime when your not pay attention to food expire dates. With this story hoping the animals would get food. The smells wasn't much describing but the slight of ants I could imagine that as well too. The hearing was kinda hard to tell, but they had been hearing intescts been for the moldy food.

Has the writer quoted speech or dialogue so as to reveal some important aspect of a character’s personality?

Yes, Most of it was about grandpa how they were been up to. Their personalities reveals who they are.

Does the writer narrate or describe events in a way that allows readers to connect them to experiences or relationships in their own lives?

Pretty much, my grandpa kinda just like him. Really the most of all, he hates animals and wants to live peacefully which means no creatures allows around. at all. It was pretty much hard time when your trying to do things right way what they wants you to do. At least the outcome would be the same results if you do that way and grandpa wants that way to be done... Over time things get better, there always room for improvement and better strategy. Just like at grocery store, I see customers complains at workers.

Has the writer explained the significance of the people, events, places, or objects in shaping who he or she has become? Does this explanation make sense in relation to the events, people, places, and things described throughout the memoir?

Pretty much yes

Does the writer provide a conclusion that reinforces the point of the story?

Yeah, grandpa wants his own ways even if nana get angry about that. Thats how he rolls. Like my grandpa love beers, he would drink six beers a day. Until one day grandma get angry at him drinking beer all the times and lock up the refrigeator. Thats big time troubles, wishing I was never in middle of that when I needs something to drink and he told me, "one beer please." Grandma would kick me as well too for giving him a beer, haha.