Persuasive Essay summary of mine

Cell phone should not be used on the road

I wrote how dangerous cell phone is while operating vehicle. There were many crashes reported from cell phone while driving. The rate was the same as drinking risk factor. Eventually if driver knew the risk, they won't put themselves in dangers but still phone was more important making call or send a text messages. The laws now are enacted in prohibits cell phones while driving, if get caught by cop they would be fined. Fines alone won't stop drivers to put aside the phone and pay attention to the road. In one research about cell phone on the road, they are seeking a device to prevent cell phone to work while in the car meaning install all devices in every vehicle. If that's the solution then it should be acted to reduce crashes and makes road more safer.

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Works Cited

1.      Governors Highway Safety Association. "Cell Phone and Texting Laws." State Highway Safety Offices. October 2011.

http://www.ghsa.org/html/stateinfo/laws/cellphone_laws.html

2.      Edgar Snyder and Associations. "Cell Phone and Texting While Driving Statistic." Edgar Snyder. 2008 and 2009 year reports.

http://www.edgarsnyder.com/car-accident/cell-phone/statistics.html

3.      Mashable Tech. "The Average Teenager Sends 3,339 Texts Per Months." 2010.

http://mashable.com/2010/10/14/nielsen-texting-stats/

 

4.      National Safety Council. "National Safety Council Estimates that At Least 1.6 Million Crashes Each Year Involve Drivers Using Cell Phones and Texting." 12 Jan. 2010.

http://www.nsc.org/Pages/NSCestimates16millioncrashescausedbydriversusingcellphonesandtexting.aspx

Added two more references. Will be editing more for my final drafts.

5.      News Center The University of Utah. "Drivers on Cell Phones are as Bad as Drunks." 29 June 2006. http://unews.utah.edu/old/p/062206-1.html

6.      Science Daily. "Talking Distractions: Why Cell Phones and Driving Don't Mix." 31 May 2008. http://www.sciencedaily.com/releases/2008/05/080531084958.htm

Style

Some tips was helpful in creating the paper with style and to have the readers to read it constantly flowing. Few rules I knew that shouldn't be written that way. Unless with exceptions of explaining like using direct quote or foreign language character's quote. Other than that, I knew some English writing rules but can't remember them all. I am not a writer but I try my best every time making my story or essay to the point and audiences understanding my literature. Helpful tips were writing in nouns and verbs not with adjective, this problems here I always tend to forget noun and verb in writing a sentence. Other is that I sometime tend to overwrite and my explanations so I fully provides every information that is needed to say. Just like Martin Luther King Jr. he wrote letter from jail which is pretty long at least he's trying to say everything, so do I. Other than that, I always try to write excellent papers knowing that I will make mistakes when someone tells me to make changes. I can't promise a best paper ever but at least I can promise you that you will understand what my point of the paper would be about.

Effective argument Martin Luther King Jr.

Martin Luther King Jr. (MLK) he was arrested in the non-violent campaign in Birmingham, Alabama. MLK wrote his letter to the fellow clergymen which himself really wanted people around the nation to hear his story about what has happens in his jail cell. Police arrested MLK for being "outside agitator" which is ought to be a crime for protest against a movement. An example of fallacy, begging the question in page 155, "Anyone who lives inside the United States can never be considered an outsider anywhere within its bounds." It is a free speech for people across the nation to promotes their thought and right like an example of MLK carefully chosen his words to describe in an meaningful thoughts.  Three appeals of logos, ethos, pathos were all used to make in the entire letter. His tone was strong bold symbols of what's going on with segregations and black's right into equally where "all men are created equals" quote from third president Thomas Jefferson. MLK has also used other quotes from famous people or from anyone who involves where there are clashes between blacks and whites. MLK was effective in writing his letter to address to whole Americans and outside the nations such as Africans people feeling like the "Waits…." must be ended meaning "they never" will resolves this problem. Other fallacy is on page 163, hasty generalization, white people do supports black culture when they are going through the hard time. "Christianity takes two thousand years to make accomplishment and  black are going in a 340 years which is thought to be an hurries." Of course, people can't live to that long to see it changes. In MLK presences, he wrote the letter to make it ends at 340 marks to bring freedoms to the blacks so they won't have to go a two thousand years to get it worked out. An ineffective part takes place when the unprepared will act quick in direct action. At least there is something to approach to the actions to make it equally and rights.


MLK impact many people as we are living today without him, his logical fallacies has many statements. I hope I can learn from him and write better persuasive paper, he is such an intelligent black leader and will always be.

Logical Fallacies

Either-or: A product at the store always comes up for the best seller. A couple is looking for a brand new television for $1,000 dollar. Option A: they would have buy 900 dollars 48 inches without 3-D vision. Or Option B: $1,100 with better sound and vision of 3-D which is awesome. The worker would encourage you to get Option B so they could make some more money as bribing. Therfore its up to the couple for their needs, they would have to persausive hard to make decision to go over the budget or save money with low quality television.

Bandwagon appeals: Doctor saying you are required for annual checkup. Yourself, you went to doctor last year and saying your perfect in health. Your friends recently got checkup and flu shot and suggesting you to get flu shot and see physican or your own family doctor to check for any signs or symptoms or any testing for disease. You thinking about this if you should see physican and talk about flu shot. Your friends gave you feedbacks that they never did got sick. Now your on neutral position wheather to get annual checkup but feeling waste of time doing this as well.

Rationalization: Making mistakes during the day. Waking up in the morning late for work because of the weather that turns the power off. Your now making excuses for return to your work late. At work you tend to be distracted but feeling guilty about lying to boss for silly excuse. Only if the power works just fine, the better you will be off during the day.

Topic

I'm going to write about texting/talking while driving at the same time should be illegal. Reason this should be promote the law so the road can become more safer to drive. None phone calls or text can be more important to make contacts.

When your opinion matters

This happens once in awhile. I always think everything at the same time and trying to answer the problem. I had said things not exactly what I wanted and think that was right. Then I realized I was wrong and had to changed it. There are time when this happens and when it doesn't work out smoothly. Can't expect everything to runs just fine and hoping it will turn out just what you wanted. There has to be two sides when one's right and one's wrong.

I'm going to college, I am in Athletic Training program. When I was freshman in college, I wanted to work with athletes and giving care that I already learned in class. So, I can applies on athletes in whatever they needs to be recovery. I had taken classes lectures about it and took test. Passed it, then I can do it. Instead, my athletic trainer supervisor says, "No, needs to be more training and practicing before you could work with athletes. You should be observing the older athletic trainer students, in order you will gain experiences before you work with athlete, understood?" I told them, "Well yeah, I can understand that, but with the athletic trainers doing special test or functional test. I wanted to be part of it instead of observing them doing it. That way I could feel if they have positive diganosis, because when your just watching, you won't be able to feel them and not learn much as you do on hands on job. With hands on the job, you are involved much more and learning much more. The more confidences you will builds up on yourself in giving properly treatments later on. With some participates, you can be feeling good about it and confidences builds up on time with learning expericences." Boss of athletic trainer said he agreed with me but afraids that we might be more harmful in giving treatment without knowing how much forces it takes unless your training and taking more test, you will feel better. Even though, I disagree with him, but has to accepts what they said. I can't overule him, at least I'm trying to make things better and better learning enivornments and learning over time builds up faster and your will be ready for the real world coming to you soon.